The first day was very stressful. I didn’t know the people in the class. I felt alone, but every new at school year is similar. Luckily I have got nice teachers. In my class we are twenty-one students, they are likeable. At the first week in easy lesson we did presentations. At the begin we were a little lost, because we had forgot some theory because of the vacation. It is difficult to get back to work. When I had the first tests I was afraid, because I didn’t know how the teachers would prepare the questions. The first notes are important to see if we must study more.
I am happy to be in High school. I think that the school is an interesting stage and very important in our life. I prefer biology, chemistry, physics and mathematics. It’s rare to find someone who likes these lessons too.
At the school I feel well. I organize my daily life around school. It’s my life.
jeudi 13 décembre 2007
Mississippi burning ( movie ) correction
At begin of the film, there are two cars. The second car is following the first. One car stops the next one. In the second car, there are policemen. In the first car, there are two white men and a black man. A policeman kills the white driver, because this white man was a friend with a black person.
After few days, two agents from FBI come to Mississippi to find these three men who have disappeared. The police in this town try to prevent them from finding them. There are some fires scare the agents. A few days later, the two agents find the car belonging to the three missing men disappeared in a tide. The white police continued to affray the two agents and the black people. A white group hit the black persons when they left the church.
On a day, a policeman wife reveals where the three dead bodies are to one of the FBI agent. When her husband learns about this, he beats her up.
At end, all bad people in this story go to the prison.
My opinion about this movie
In the film, we can see the differences, in Mississippi, between black and white people. It’s a very good movie. There are some examples about the violence from white persons. In this village, there is a place for black people and another place for the white people.
After few days, two agents from FBI come to Mississippi to find these three men who have disappeared. The police in this town try to prevent them from finding them. There are some fires scare the agents. A few days later, the two agents find the car belonging to the three missing men disappeared in a tide. The white police continued to affray the two agents and the black people. A white group hit the black persons when they left the church.
On a day, a policeman wife reveals where the three dead bodies are to one of the FBI agent. When her husband learns about this, he beats her up.
At end, all bad people in this story go to the prison.
My opinion about this movie
In the film, we can see the differences, in Mississippi, between black and white people. It’s a very good movie. There are some examples about the violence from white persons. In this village, there is a place for black people and another place for the white people.
the correct text 2 about where I live and my daily life
Hello, Ratasha Boll,
I am going to write about where I live.
I live in an appartment on the second floor. It's large, there are four rooms: a
kitchen and three bedrooms. There is a bathroom too. I've got a bedroom to myself.
In my bedroom there is a bed, a desk, my computer and my school books. In the
kitchen, there is a refrigerator, a freezer, a table, there are four chairs, some
cupboards and a stove. My building has got five floors and it's made out of concrete.
My neighborhood is next to the city. There are a lot of shops and some buildings. The
people are very nice. I'm going to write about my daily life. In the morning, I get
up at 6 am, I wash my face and brush my hair. After that, I take breakfast with my
father, my mother and my brother. While I'm having, my breakfast I watch television. I
take my bag and I go to the stop bus. I take the bus and I go to school. At 12h30 I
have lunch. After the school, I come home. I take my snack and I listen to music.
After that I do my homework and I watch television. At 8 pm, my family and I have
dinner. Then I take a shower, I brush my teeth and my hair. I go to bed and sleep.
Best wishes
I am going to write about where I live.
I live in an appartment on the second floor. It's large, there are four rooms: a
kitchen and three bedrooms. There is a bathroom too. I've got a bedroom to myself.
In my bedroom there is a bed, a desk, my computer and my school books. In the
kitchen, there is a refrigerator, a freezer, a table, there are four chairs, some
cupboards and a stove. My building has got five floors and it's made out of concrete.
My neighborhood is next to the city. There are a lot of shops and some buildings. The
people are very nice. I'm going to write about my daily life. In the morning, I get
up at 6 am, I wash my face and brush my hair. After that, I take breakfast with my
father, my mother and my brother. While I'm having, my breakfast I watch television. I
take my bag and I go to the stop bus. I take the bus and I go to school. At 12h30 I
have lunch. After the school, I come home. I take my snack and I listen to music.
After that I do my homework and I watch television. At 8 pm, my family and I have
dinner. Then I take a shower, I brush my teeth and my hair. I go to bed and sleep.
Best wishes
dimanche 2 décembre 2007
My begin of the school
The first day was very stressful. I didn’t know all people in the class. I felt
alone, but each begin at school it is similar. Luckily I have got nice teachers. In my
class we are twenty-one students, they are likeable. At the first week in easy lesson
we did presentations. At the begin we are a little lost, because we forgot some theory
because of the vacation. It does hard begin again to study. When I had the first tests
I was afraid, because I didn’t know how the teachers do the questions. The first notes
are important to see if we must study more.
I am happy to be at the college. I think that the school is a stage interesting
and very important in our life. I prefer biology, chemistry, physics and mathematics.
It’s rare to find someone who likes these lessons too.
At the school I feel well. I organize my daily life about the college. It’s my life.
alone, but each begin at school it is similar. Luckily I have got nice teachers. In my
class we are twenty-one students, they are likeable. At the first week in easy lesson
we did presentations. At the begin we are a little lost, because we forgot some theory
because of the vacation. It does hard begin again to study. When I had the first tests
I was afraid, because I didn’t know how the teachers do the questions. The first notes
are important to see if we must study more.
I am happy to be at the college. I think that the school is a stage interesting
and very important in our life. I prefer biology, chemistry, physics and mathematics.
It’s rare to find someone who likes these lessons too.
At the school I feel well. I organize my daily life about the college. It’s my life.
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