the correct text about where I live and my daily life

I live in an appartment on the second floor. It's large, there are four rooms: a kitchen and three bedrooms. There is a bathroom too. I've got a bedroom for me only . In my bedroom there is a bed, a desk, my computer and my school books . In the kitchen, there is a refrigerator, a freezer, a table, there are four chairs, some cupboards and a stove.My building has got five floors and it's made out of concrete.My neighborhood is next to the city. There are a lot of shops and some buildings. The people are very nice.I'm going to write you about my daily life. In the morning, I get up at 6 am, I wash my face and brush my hair. After that I take my breakfast with my father,my mother and my brother. While I'm having my breakfast I watch television. I take my bag and I go to the stop bus. I take the bus and I go to school. At12h30 I have lunch. After the school I come home. I take my snack and I listen to music. After that I do my homework and I watch television. At 8 pm my family and I have dinner. Then I take a shower, I brush my teeth and my hair. I go to bed and sleep.

Where I live and my daily life

I live in an appartment, it's in the second floor. It's large, there are four rooms: a kitchen and three bedrooms. There is a bathroom too. I've got a bedroom for only me. In my bedroom there is a bed, a desk, my computer and my books of the school. In the kitchen there is a refrigerator, a freezer, a table, four chairs, some cupboards and a cooker.
My building has got five floors and it's about concrete.
My neighborhood is next to the city. There are a lot of shops and some buildings. The people are very nice.
I'm going to write you about my daily life. In the morning I get up at 6 o'clock, I wash my face and brush my hair. After that I take my breakfast with my father, my mother and my brother. During I'm taking my breakfast I watch television. I take my bag and I go to the stop bus. I take the bus and I go to school. At 12h30 I take my lunch. After the school I come home. I take my snack and I listen to music. After that I make my homework and I watch television. At 20 o'clock I with my family take the diner. Than I take my shower, I brush my tooth and my hair. I go to bed and sleep.